The Story of the Tribes

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The Story of the Tribes

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On the last on-line SOS I mentioned that after abandoning this project in 2015 (started in 2009), I've suddenly had some inspiration and opened it up, and got to work on it again.

At the end of this post I'll add the entire storyline, so you can get the overall idea. I'll also stick some mp3s on SC in private links so you can get an idea of some of the completed bits.

Part 1 and oddly, part 6 need no work at all. I've made a few minor tweaks to part 2.
Part three was the one that was holding me up. It's now done :)

Part 4 I'd barely scratched, and now I've got the introductory bit of it done, and have a fair idea where to take it. Part 5 is the only one I've not touched at all yet.

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Part One - In Search Of The Lost Tribes

The travellers return to find their homes empty, with not a sign of their families and friends visible in the ruins of their village, nor the neighbouring villages. Indeed, even the great city is deserted and starting to decay, but there they find a clue.

A city scribe has left a tantalising ledger entry that says all must leave. There are details of when and how, but no explanation of why, nor where the tribes will go.

The travellers rest for a few days while they consider their options, then with heavy hearts begin their search, having no idea of when or whether they will be reunited with their loved ones.

Part Two - The Long Years (of the tribes search)

Sixty people started this search for the tribes. Over the long years a dozen have been lost, victim to accident, illness or bandits. Near to exhaustion, with what meagre supplies remain, the travellers set up camp in a sheltered valley far from their old country. After so many false leads and dashed hopes, they must decide: Do they continue, or accept defeat?

That evening the decision is made. A handful of the fittest set out for the last time with the village calling horn. It will be no more than a three day onward search, while the remainder consider the best location should they need to build new homes.

Part Three - Taming The Stones

Three generations ago the tribes were forced to leave their country when a fireball fell from the sky scattering shining stones that killed. All know the epic tale of the band of travellers left behind, who then searched for many years before, at last, finding the tribes' new homeland.

The tribes council quickly realised the hard won survival skills of the 'seekers' (as they became known) were valuable for surveying their new lands. They encouraged a loose cadre with a small but growing number of youngsters joining.

Quietly, while the tribes thrived, the elder seekers and those of a naturally curious mind, made trips to the old country to study the shining stones, knowing this would probably kill them. A chance discovery of an insect very sensitive to the emanations dramatically reduced this risk. Much later, it was discovered that a soft grey metal could safely contain the stones. All were taken by the new 'curators' to a remote village and placed in a great vault lined with the 'veiling' metal. This was then sealed.

The effect of even limited exposure to the stones, along with the deep pain of seeing their once lovely city, towns and villages in ruins took it's toll on those undertaking this heroic task, both young and old. They regarded themselves as the stone's curators although to the greater community became known as the 'quiet ones'.

Part Four - The Gathering Storm

For many years, apart from occasional minor tribal squabbles, it had been a time of peace. A prosperous city hub was now surrounded by townlets, and further outlying villages. Over time, the seekers became renowned as peacekeepers. They also became defenders as they developed the ability to deal with occasional bandit raids on outlying villages. However this idyll was shattered when a young seeker came hard riding into the city, telling of a horde of barbarians heading this way. A scouting party was sent out to covertly watch the barbarians to try to find any weaknesses they may have.

Part Five - Curators Of The Stones

As the barbarians slowly came ever closer, study revealed that all command was from just three chieftains, and that the horde, in fear of these, did whatever they were ordered to without question. Any spoils from ransacked communities were immediately claimed by these three, who then doled out lesser trinkets as favours.

By sheer chance, the almost deserted curator's village was right in the path the barbarians must take if they were to come across the tribes. The tribes council and the seekers formed a plan to use this as a first line of defense. Volunteers were sought to build up the numbers and create a believable community that could create some resistance, allowing the greater communities time to prepare. However, the reclusive curators quietly made further plans they hoped would stop the barbarians completely.

Part Six - Bring Them Home (Restitution)

The curators' plan had worked. Pretending the vault contained religious artifacts, and sacrificing themselves trying to defend it, ensured the barbarians would break in seeking treasure. The greed of the three chieftains ensured they were the first to succumb to the deadly effects of close proximity to many shining stones. The barbarians, weakened by the loss and by fear of the stones had little thirst for fighting. The short battle left just one junior captain with the intelligence and capability of some form of regroup and onward march to the greater towns that must exist. However, looking from the barbarians to the people who had given their lives for their brethren made the captain pause for thought. Sitting, alongside a dying defender a promise was made.

Several days later people of the nearby townlet were astonished at the arrival of a small ragged band of injured, following a cart. Its sad cargo led by a strange female warrior.
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Links! Don't tease us with this!
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Wow - this IS a most ambitious project Will! 8-):thumbup:

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Very cool stuff!
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I'd gone to bed by the time you posted this but listening now. :thumbup:
I love stuff that has a story behind it.
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How programmatic are the tunes? For instance, the Stones are at the center of the story, and 'Taming the Stones' is a departure from your usual approach. You usually get a tune up and rolling and then you hold that pattern until it's done - I do that a lot myself these days too - simple's good. But with 'Stones', unusually, the tune morphs part way in. Programmatic?
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It's all done in the MIDI domain - KISS principle.

The first part recorded then Muted (4 tracks)
The second part recorded starting from where I wanted the overlap to start (9 tracks)
MIDI volume pedal sent direct to all the first part, then via an inverter (0=127, 127 = 0) only to the three tracks of the second part that sound at that point.

Pedal set at max, then eased back for the overlap - several practices first, then set to actually embed the CC values in the tracks.
Complete MIDI recording saved for future tweakery :)
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Martin Walker wrote: Wed Aug 18, 2021 10:08 pmWow - this IS a most ambitious project Will!

Amazing! It's Wagnerian in scope. :clap:

(Just listening to The Long Years - very mellow.)

Do the stories come first, or do they develop alongside the music?
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Folderol wrote: Fri Aug 20, 2021 6:38 pm It's all done in the MIDI domain - KISS principle.

By 'programmatic', I meant does the music reflect the story? The piece called 'Taming the Stones' morphs partway through - does that morph reflect the story you outlined?
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awjoe wrote: Sat Aug 21, 2021 1:59 am
Folderol wrote: Fri Aug 20, 2021 6:38 pm It's all done in the MIDI domain - KISS principle.

By 'programmatic', I meant does the music reflect the story? The piece called 'Taming the Stones' morphs partway through - does that morph reflect the story you outlined?

I think it does. The first part is the general happy background of the tribes and the early part of the journey. The second the deep sadness in the old lands combined with the los of friends to the stones.

If you don't think so, then I've failed :(
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That fits. Cheers.
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BJG145 wrote: Fri Aug 20, 2021 9:50 pm
Martin Walker wrote: Wed Aug 18, 2021 10:08 pmWow - this IS a most ambitious project Will!

Amazing! It's Wagnerian in scope. :clap:

(Just listening to The Long Years - very mellow.)

Do the stories come first, or do they develop alongside the music?

Oops. Missed this :blush:

For part one, the music came first, and was almost complete before the title came to me. It was quite a long time after that that I had the idea of a series and wrote the entire story line, then started to separate it out into musical ideas. It's definitely not the way I usually work and has been quite a challenge.

I'm currently working on part four. Progress has been slow :( but at least there is progress!
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I've started working on this in an even more different way to my normal methods. Instead of quite long sessions, I've run it through, then added just a few phrases of what comes to mind.
Put everything away, and come back a few days later, and maybe tweak what I did last time, possibly adding a bit more, then put it away again.
It seems that my subconscious is running a background 'task' so I get an easier ride and don't get stressed out :)

This might give a slower result, but I think it'll be a better one!
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Slow and steady, after all, nothing's on fire.

Unless something is, actually, on fire; in which case a degree of pace is appropriate.
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This is a very amibitious project - I love that. Being ambitious is risky but the challenge of it will produce great results I'm sure. I enjoy what you've done so far.
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Thanks Richard.

I've now got the first draft of part 4 in place 'The Gathering Storm'.
I'll probably shuffle things around a bit, and maybe change some of the sounds. I haven't done anything with the stereo field yet. The 'wind' will of course sweep across :)

It is here:
https://soundcloud.com/soft-sounds/the-gathering-storm
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Track not found?
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Oops. Sorry.
I failed to copy the code suffix. Try this:

https://soundcloud.com/soft-sounds/the- ... uLf9CesZtc
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Folderol wrote: Tue Sep 07, 2021 9:18 pm Thanks Richard.

I've now got the first draft of part 4 in place 'The Gathering Storm'.
I'll probably shuffle things around a bit, and maybe change some of the sounds. I haven't done anything with the stereo field yet. The 'wind' will of course sweep across :)

Of course it will! Louder than a nightingale?

The Gathering Storm? There'll be tears.

A storm cropped up in one of my tunes recently. I'm going to try to release it in November, because that's maybe the stormiest of the year. You have to think of these things, right?
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That works. :thumbup:
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I think it's a fantastic story and enjoyed catching up on the SC links. I like the relatively abrupt changes in tone and pace in the tracks and found that reading the relevant chapter while listening to them was pleasingly evocative :clap:
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Thanks a lot folks. I'm delighted it works... so far!
Yes, Eddy, I was hoping people would read the story along with the music. My first experience of this idea was as a kid in school. The LCC used to put on story-based concerts in the Festival Hall for schools.
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I think this track is ready now (put on top of the old one). The wind blows across, there are a few timing tweaks, a bit more separation in places, a less abrupt end of the gallop and a slightly spooky bit right at the end. :D
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I've revised the first track (In Search of the Lost Tribes). I wasn't happy with the harshness of the sound, and once getting to work on it I realised the lead sound was masking a lot of other detail.

The new version is here:
https://soundcloud.com/soft-sounds/in-s ... ZCTXikd9X7

The old version is still up there for comparison.

There are only two sounds that are completely different, the lead, and the mid-section counter melody, but a lot of the others have been adjusted. I'd particularly like a young pair of ears on the last part, where some very high pitch chimes come in - to be sure they are not too loud.
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