Hi everyone! I recently produced a track and I was wondering if you could give me some feedback on the mix.
If you have a few minutes, could you listen to the track and let me know what you think? Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. I'm always looking for ways to improve.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1JLGPEt ... sp=sharing
Thank you so much!
Mixing Feedback Request For My New Track
Mixing Feedback Request For My New Track
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- redturtle1997
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Re: Mixing Feedback Request For My New Track
Few thoughts as I listen.
Love that drum vibe on the intro.
Nice width some of the effects.
Unexpected drum drop-out at 1:22-ish. Not sure that entirely works for me. Feels like it could have been longer because that's the only place the drums don't play.
Feels like there's space to take the riff and push it out wide one side and do the same the other way with the counter that comes in around 1:30.
I was expecting a repeat of some of the narration towards the end, feels like there's space for something there.
Feels very together though, better ears than mine will probably have more to add but I'd be pretty happy with that mix overall.
Love that drum vibe on the intro.
Nice width some of the effects.
Unexpected drum drop-out at 1:22-ish. Not sure that entirely works for me. Feels like it could have been longer because that's the only place the drums don't play.
Feels like there's space to take the riff and push it out wide one side and do the same the other way with the counter that comes in around 1:30.
I was expecting a repeat of some of the narration towards the end, feels like there's space for something there.
Feels very together though, better ears than mine will probably have more to add but I'd be pretty happy with that mix overall.
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- Drew Stephenson
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Re: Mixing Feedback Request For My New Track
Weird. I had that initially but reloaded the page and it played ok.
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- Drew Stephenson
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Re: Mixing Feedback Request For My New Track
I had the same problem, and have had it before, occasionally. I run NoScript, and sometimes just allowing certain scripts fixes it. Other times, like this one, I have to relax my cookie policies a little as well.
I like it!
Mostly, agree with all that Drew said. I wouldn't make that drum drop-out longer though. I would do it again, once or twice, and those might be (progressively?) longer. And more of the narration later on, but not necessarily repeats (unless, maybe, short snippets, with cool effects?). ...and I felt that it was a touch too loud, except for a few words. So I might level it a little, and tuck it in a bit.
I like it!
Mostly, agree with all that Drew said. I wouldn't make that drum drop-out longer though. I would do it again, once or twice, and those might be (progressively?) longer. And more of the narration later on, but not necessarily repeats (unless, maybe, short snippets, with cool effects?). ...and I felt that it was a touch too loud, except for a few words. So I might level it a little, and tuck it in a bit.BWC