My Eye Your Eye

[amanise]

Quirky cautionary tale of impending woes - to jig around to.

Adrian Manise

UKU9S1900031

https://soundcloud.com/adrian-manise/my ... al_sharing

Thanks again to all who took part

[amanise]

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Thanks again to all who took part

New link for final version.
https://soundcloud.com/adrian-manise/my ... al_sharing

[Martin Walker]

Funky! This one should get people dancing

I love the overall structure and all the changes.
Bravo on all the improvements and extra polish!

Martin

[amanise]

Funky! This one should get people dancing

I love the overall structure and all the changes.
Bravo on all the improvements and extra polish!

Martin

Thankyou! Too kind! Yes, there's nothing like sending someone a message that they're going to ruin their lives and loose everything to a quirky foot tapping jingle!

[Drew Stephenson]

Finally caught up with this now that I've got a signal strong enough to stream music.

(Still think the verse vocal could come up. )
The chorus and bridge work particularly well.

[amanise]

Finally caught up with this now that I've got a signal strong enough to stream music.

(Still think the verse vocal could come up. )
The chorus and bridge work particularly well.

Well, thanks to your input Drew! I've since gone up in the world and invested in an NT1A - so next time better vocals hopefully. Next one is in the pipe now and is going to be called "Mystique Mean Streak".

[Drew Stephenson]

Well, thanks to your input Drew! I've since gone up in the world and invested in an NT1A - so next time better vocals hopefully. Next one is in the pipe now and is going to be called "Mystique Mean Streak".

[awjoe]

From unlikely beginnings to likeable in a couple of minutes. Good job! Plus, I thought this one had an unusual time signature at first, but it's just the way it moves. I like it.

[awjoe]

(Still think the verse vocal could come up. )

Or the big drums down a dB?

[Folderol]

Actually, I don't know what to make of this. I've never heard anything like it!

[amanise]

From unlikely beginnings to likeable in a couple of minutes. Good job! Plus, I thought this one had an unusual time signature at first, but it's just the way it moves. I like it.

Too kind! That's exactly what I was shooting for
The kick is the one to follow on the way in, and then it all unfolds from there. Thanks! High praise indeed!
Adrian

[amanise]

Actually, I don't know what to make of this. I've never heard anything like it!

That's also what I was looking for
Maybe I've actually done the impossible and come up with something new? I doubt it though....