Runing

[Adam Artman]

Hello to my all friends.
this is my new track.i hope you enjoy it.
sorry if mix is not perfect,cause i don't have Studio.

https://soundcloud.com/user-390221632/r ... al_sharing

[MarkOne]

So first let me preface this with the caveat that this isn't a genre I really listen to a great deal*, so what I know about it could probably be written on the back of a stamp.

listening on earbuds, there is nothing that stands out as terrible mix wise.

In that first buildup I was expecting that characteristic machine-gun snare leading it into the drop, but like I said, that do I know?

I think the part that is just drums and the bass synth is too exposed without anything else going on there. (Some filter sweeps or something?)

Generally as I understand it in this kind of stuff there are lots of bits of ear candy like impacts and synth whoosh sounds between sections and I was thinking there should be some fairy dust arpeggios here and there.

The last breakdown probably needs a really big build up to the final high energy section.

But it sounds like it's got the makings of something that wouldn't sound out of place at a beach party**

*Actually, at all!

**Last year Cafe Mambo set up a weekend beach party right across the road from us and a lot of what I could hear sounded a lot like this.

[Drew Stephenson]

Like MarkOne this isn't a genre I listen to but it doesn't sound out of place at a casual listen - though I do think there are opportunities for a bit more ear candy and I was expecting a bigger hit for the final loud section.
Good job I reckon.

[amanise]

Hello!

Like those commenting before - I must point out I don't really understand this genre, but there was a lot I liked!

The fade out -
The synth voices -
The overall mix -
The overall accessibility -

There was only one thing that kind of pricked my ears up a bit. There seems to be a bit of a hole at around 3:03 where everything just sort of stops. Then it carries on again quite happily. It just seemed like a noticeable halt in the proceedings for no apparent reason. Maybe that was the intention - I don't know. I'm wondering if some swirly sort of glue around that transition might help it along there? Just a thought.

[Adam Artman]

Thank you a lot my friends for your feedbacks.
yeah I'm sorry for it if is not so good cause it was an only fast demo.
my focus was more on making good and different melody.
maybe if i had a partner that was in my music style,we could make better together.

[amanise]

Looks to me like you're doing fine with that as it is - nearly finished!
Good work!
Adrian

[Folderol]

I rather enjoyed that as it is. The brief stop at the end of the first drop is classic for the style and I think you got the time just right. However I would suggest some sort of background beat running through the second drop so your dancers/headbangers don't lose the timing.