Feedback - Instrumental Electronic Track

[redturtle1997]

Hi Guys! Sorry if I'm being annoying by posting so many of my tracks here, I just like this platform and among the rest of those who are related to music production and mixing on the internet, I find it most helpful here. I've been improving my skills and learning more with your feedback that you guys are providing me with.

So I'm working on a new EP and I have this instrumental electronic track that for me feels special for idk what reason but I'm entitled to make it as good as it can get. I want to hear your opinion about it and if you have any notes in general:

https://voca.ro/12I2U3NYW3yl

[redturtle1997]

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[zenguitar]

Bumping topics is regarded as poor etiquette here. There may be a case after a week or so, but not so soon.

Remember, many of us have been away at the weekend for SynthFest.

Andy

[Drew Stephenson]

Bit slow to respond to some of these threads as I've been away.
A few quick thoughts:
To me the track needs to evolve, there's some ear candy around but the same melodic elements and we don't really get anything new until the arpeggios at 1:45.
There's not really much to get my teeth into I'm afraid.

[redturtle1997]

Bit slow to respond to some of these threads as I've been away.
A few quick thoughts:
To me the track needs to evolve, there's some ear candy around but the same melodic elements and we don't really get anything new until the arpeggios at 1:45.
There's not really much to get my teeth into I'm afraid.

Thanks, it's an outro track for my new EP. What do you think about the mixing in specific?

[Drew Stephenson]

Only the usual comment about considering using narrower sounds mixed wide rather than wide sounds that inevitably end up sharing the middle of stereo field.
Aside from that it's all sitting ok to my ears.