Hi Ben!
“…if stagnant production has been the cause of rock's fall off in the mainstream.“
This is quite a large amount of presupposition and broad stretch of causation vs correlation.
The core assumption seems pretty shaky too! I don’t think it’s true that rock has fallen off the mainstream and actually can quantifiably be proved otherwise. Can you further qualify the context around that statement?
Perhaps I’m wrong! Can you show me statistics, studies, etc that support your claim for this survey? I’m assuming you have this already, given it being a university project and requires oversight from a professor. I would like to learn from the journalistic evidence you have prepared.
Otherwise the basis of this survey is just ‘vibes’
