I assume this is a remix content?
Thoughts as I listen:
Like the phone intro.

First thought is that I think the vocal needs another few passes with a fader rider to make it more consistent throughout. There are syllables where it drops under the supporting instruments a bit much.
The piano is super-wide, it makes for a nice ear candy effect but it does mean it almost disappears in mono.
The sample kick that comes in around 44 sec is a bit loud for me (and I like a good bottom end), might need to fade it in a bit.
It's nice and dynamic.

The guitar riffs jumping around right to left are a bit distracting to me. Is it just the one riff over to the right?
Ok, possibly a bit too dynamic at about 2:35 and 2:50!

Just feels a bit out of control.
Tonally the balance is nice as are the instrument levels, though personally I might like to hear a little more on the bass guitar.
On a second listen through I wonder if you could have created a bit more in the way of ear candy, the first minute or so has nice bits popping up and disappearing but after then it's pretty much just the band playing. I think there could have been space for some interesting reverb / delay throws, bringing back some of the electronic drum sounds, perhaps.
Maybe space for an instrumental drop out for a bar or so to really let the vocal shine?
I wish I'd been producing mixes like that after just a year though!
