Not a genre I normally listen to but thoughts as I listen:
For me the electric piano is a bit loud. It's overpowering the vocal.
Really clear, stripped back mix.
Nice mix up on the flow leading up to 1:40.
For me you could add a bit more variety in there. Most of the elements start at the beginning of the track and run all the way through. What if you dropped some of them out here and there, try a break bar perhaps.
You've got some good lyrics in there, they could probably stand alone in occasional places to add emphasis; you nearly do it at 1:50 but I think it could stand it elsewhere as well, and to a greater extent.
Good work.
