Hello, I'm SeungWoo.
This is my second song.
Enjoy!!!
https://soundcloud.com/ares6scfdqmf/rev ... al_sharing
heyyy!!!!!!!!! This is my second song!!!
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heyyy!!!!!!!!! This is my second song!!!
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- SeungWoo Kim
- Posts: 3 Joined: Mon Jun 13, 2022 2:00 pm
Re: heyyy!!!!!!!!! This is my second song!!!
That top end is too aggressive for me ears I'm afraid.
Ignore the post count, I have no idea what I'm doing...
Re: heyyy!!!!!!!!! This is my second song!!!
Ouch - I agree with Drew about the top end (it's so gritty!), and the overall mix is so flatline compressed/squashed that it's difficult to hear any details on what's going on in the mix.
Relax your compression settings a bit and I'm sure we'll be able to offer more constructive feedback.
Relax your compression settings a bit and I'm sure we'll be able to offer more constructive feedback.
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- Martin Walker
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Re: heyyy!!!!!!!!! This is my second song!!!
Difficult to know what to say here.
Assuming this is not a joke, you need to actually listen objectively to what you are doing. I don't think you are listening to what you are doing, I think you're vibing that your doing something, which is great that your enjoying it, but its not enjoyable to listen to.
A few points
Mix is in no way balanced, drums are non existent, frequency balance bias to top end, the explosion sound effect is just horrible to listen to, and not even tailed properly, 'musical' elements repetitive with no light and shade. No tension, no intensity etc
I would suggest to put on a similar commercial track and compare it to yours, note the differences hopefully this will give you a few pointers about where you're going wrong.
Also step away from the limiter!
Assuming this is not a joke, you need to actually listen objectively to what you are doing. I don't think you are listening to what you are doing, I think you're vibing that your doing something, which is great that your enjoying it, but its not enjoyable to listen to.
A few points
Mix is in no way balanced, drums are non existent, frequency balance bias to top end, the explosion sound effect is just horrible to listen to, and not even tailed properly, 'musical' elements repetitive with no light and shade. No tension, no intensity etc
I would suggest to put on a similar commercial track and compare it to yours, note the differences hopefully this will give you a few pointers about where you're going wrong.
Also step away from the limiter!
Re: heyyy!!!!!!!!! This is my second song!!!
Rather abrupt end!
Well, I guess your first one was even worse. OK, now let's hear the third. Maybe a bit less compression/limiting?
Well, I guess your first one was even worse. OK, now let's hear the third. Maybe a bit less compression/limiting?
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- Exalted Wombat
Jedi Poster - Posts: 5754 Joined: Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:00 am Location: London UK
You don't have to write songs. The world doesn't want you to write songs. It would probably prefer it if you didn't. So write songs if you want to. Otherwise, dont bore us with beefing about it. Go fishing instead.