I'd really appreciate feedback on this mix

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blinddrew wrote: Wed Sep 21, 2022 2:26 pm
"The problem with opinions is that everyone's got at least one." ;)

FTFY. :lol:

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Fun track, I enjoy the vocals and flow of the song. I agree with others that the snare is super tinny and I find it distracting. I assume they are samples so perhaps try swapping out a different snare sample? There is also a lot of reverb and it hides some of the subtleties of the production. In particular on the keys. It is an important part of the vibe of the song so maybe bring it in and out a bit. Perhaps modulate the depth of the reverb. Just a suggestion.

Overall, great work and thanks for sharing!
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Post by Exalted Wombat »

It's a very ingenious snare drum part, but I think you may have fallen in love with it! You can't feature both it and the vocal up front quite so much.
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Post by W1D3Y8W0Y »

LOVE the track, great work
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